PART ONE : THE KITTEN Chapter 1 My name is Nathaniel J. Claw and I am the Captain of a loyal and resourceful crew of cats who are dedicated to the struggle against the pirate dogs on the Cocker Spaniel Main. This is my story. I was born one of a litter of seven. Seven is a lucky number for cats, much as nine is, and I was the seventh son of a seventh son, which has always been considered a magical combination. From the start, then, my family expected great things from me. The only thing that disappointed them was my colour. My mother was a sealpoint Himalayan; my father was a shaded silver Persian. My paternal grandfather, however, was a common grey alley cat. It was my grandfather who had all the courage, however, and he was a terrific street fighter in his day. He still knows a few tricks with claw and fang to deter an impertinent youth from taking over a piece of the alley! I am the spitting image of my grandfather, Tom Cattington. I am a grey cat with no distinguishing marks, except for a white star at the tip of my tail. There is an old saying that all cats are grey in the dark, but I am grey in all of the Nineworlds, whether in sunlight or in darkness. It can be a useful characteristic actually, especially when setting up an ambush for a pack of dishonest dogs. The earliest days of my youth were spent on the docks, where my uncle built ships for Her Majesty's navy. This uncle of mine had the reputation of having been a bit of a rogue in his own youth, but he had taken his ill- gotten gains and apparently invested them in a very reputable business, and had obtained a charter from the Queen to build and outfit all ships leaving our island. It was from my uncle that I learned how to sail and chart a course by the stars. The Great Cat in the North, with the PoleCat Star at the tip of his tail is the one to follow when all maps are lost, and I learned that lesson well. It saved my life and the life of my Crew on our ill-fated adventure round the Cape of Good Happenstance. But I digress a little. I learned the art of sailing and the art of fighting on the docks as a young cat, and I probably would have joined the Queen's Navy if circumstances had been different. Unfortunately, my father had made a powerful enemy in Lord Balfour when he stole my mother from under his whiskers and eloped with her. Lord Balfour had never forgiven him. When a chance arose to discredit him with the Queen, Lord Balfour leapt to it and accused him falsely of treason, forging documents that allegedly proved my family's disloyalty to the Crown. The sheriffs arrived one stormy morning to impound our property and my father met them at the gate, sword in hand. He fell to a barrage of gunfire, and I, a mere lad still, took up the sword which lay next to his bleeding corpse and sought to avenge his honour then and there. I would have died in the process, no doubt, rash and inexperienced as I was, if my uncle had not grabbed me by the scruff of my neck and spirited me away, kicking and protesting. He threw me into the care of his shipmaster, and off I went, quite ungraciously, to escape the Queen's wrath by embarking upon the first voyage of my life. Chapter 2 I was not grateful to my uncle, I have to confess. Although I was keen on the idea of going to sea and having adventures, my soul was consumed with the desire to take vengeance on Lord Balfour, the cat responsible for my father's death. Apart from this, I was horribly seasick for the first three days. A miserable cat indeed, hardly the dashing figure I would like to have been! After I 'got my sea legs' and recovered from my bout of seasickness, I was treated like any other new sailor and put to work scrubbing the decks. I was deeply offended by this, and resolved to jump ship at the first opportunity. Now, of course, I realise that he behaved both wisely and properly in showing no special favour to a young, arrogant cat who thought he had very little to learn! I have to say that if I have become a decent Captain, most of the credit is due to my uncle. The biggest difference between my Uncle and his brother, my own father, was the fact that my Uncle was a merchant, and loved nothing better than a good bargain, or making a hefty profit on a commercial transaction. My father was a traditional aristocat, on the other hand, and did not feel that any member of our family should soil his hands or his spirit with 'filthy lucre.' He tried to instil the same attitudes in me, but quite honestly, I did not see much virtue in living in a castle where all of the walls were crumbling and the ceilings sprang a hundred new leaks every time a heavy storm hit, simply because my father was too stubborn to change with the times. After all, many aristocats in our time have restored their fortunes through acute business sense. How can it be more honourable for a noblecat to marry a feline female with a fortune than to earn ones riches through honest labour? Consequently, I always secretly admired my clever Uncle who brought exotic gifts from faraway lands to his favourite nephew when he visited our home, and did not understand my father's continuing refusal to go into partnership with his brother. My father was dead, however, and the ancestral home had been put to the torch by a group of thugs hired by Lord Balfour. I hated the menial labour my Uncle insisted on assigning me, but the truth of the matter was that I was off to a good start in the fine art of making a profit. 'Sell to the birds?' my father scoffed, laughing heartily. 'One doesn't enter into financial transactions with one's dinner!' 'These birds have a lot of power and even more money,' my Uncle retorted. 'You are a hundred years behind the times. The Longbarrow Birds are one of the largest cartels in the South Pacific, and they spend freely in order to impress the world with their newfound wealth and power. They have no qualms at spending a fortune on rare seed for a banquet, and that is one of the easiest cargos I can think of carrying. Weighs next to nothing in the hold, and no pirate will target our ship for a cargo of birdseed!' 'You are out of your mind!' my father laughed. 'What next?' 'Come into partnership with me. This castle needs a new roof, and I know that the harvest was very poor this year.' 'I am a gentleman, not a merchant,' my father replied, with quiet (and possibly foolish) dignity. 'If you choose to forget the blue blood running through our veins, I will never do so.' 'Our own father was a common alley tom!' my uncle retorted. 'No, you know better than that! He was considered so, by our Queen, because he was of the old Catswold Clan. But the Catswold Clan were kings of the North before the Ironcat invasion, and the blood ran pure in his veins.' 'Well, blue blood won't patch up a leaking roof, brother,' my uncle replied with a heavy sigh. 'Your pride will be your undoing one day.' He spoke prophetically. If my father had not been so proud, he would not have earned the enmity of Lord Balfour, who resented the Catwold Clan and its ancient heritage. Lord Balfour was of the merchant class originally, but with a series of judicious loans to the Crown, managed to insinuate himself into a title, and bit by bit, bought up all of the lands in our province. My father alone refused to sell to him. He became a thorn in Balfour's side, as our land bordered on the Felion River, which was the main artery of commerce from here to the capital. Without access to the river, Balfour was doomed to play an increasingly small role in providing the capital with goods. He would not accept my father's refusal, however, and in the end, my father died for his pride and for a castle that was a safety hazard for its inhabitants. Chapter 3 Apart from the wretched state of seasickness which the Lords of Mischance visited upon me, our journey to the South Pacific passed without any untoward incident. We docked in due course at the Port of St. Caw, and were met by a most distinguished delegation of birds. The whole business was peculiar to say the least: a shipload of cats being met by a group of nervous birds, who were determined to show only the best of manners, and not to give any hint of their natural terror. The fashions of the BarrowLands were about fifty years behind ours, and the Longbarrow birds were bewigged and powdered in the manner of my own grandfather's generation. If you have never seen a pelican wearing a curled wig, staggering about on platformed court shoes, you can have no real idea of how hilarious the sight was to our entire crew. We made a great show of grooming our whiskers in order to conceal the smiles we could not control. To his credit, my uncle managed to behave with all of the decorum the transaction merited. After all, we exchanged a few sackfuls of birdseed for a cargohold of treasure in gold, silver and gems. My uncle, a true merchant, did not even show curiosity as to the provenance of the treasure we received from the Barrow Birds, but I had retained the lively curiosity which has more than once been the death of members of our species, and has even been immortalised in a nursery saw, to wit: 'Curiosity killed the cat!' In fact, an idle remark to the maid who was airing out our rooms elicited the answer to the mystery and my uncle subsequently cursed me roundly for having uncovered a fact that was to bring him much misery. 'The treasure?' the maid replied, struggling to turn a straw mattress. (For obvious reasons, there were no proper feather mattresses on the Islands, but a cat can sleep in comfort in almost any position anywhere.) 'Why, the Islands are filled with treasure!' she continued. 'These are the BarrowLands, after all!' I had thought Barrow to refer to the rather lowly class of merchant known as 'barrow boy', but apparently it described something that had more to do with my people than with hers. 'They are haunted, you know,' she told me with relish. 'Otherwise, after all of these years, there would be nothing left of the treasure. But only a few birds will venture forth to rob the ancient graves. Usually it's the Vulture Gang, although more often than not you can find them in gaol. It's their nature, you know. Picking over the carcasses of the dead... Begging your pardon, Sir. A Vulture youth once took a fancy to me, but my mum carried on so, you would have thought he was the Foul One himself. Just as well. He was hanged last month in the Courtyard of Justice. Do you like to watch a good hanging, Sir? There are two scheduled tomorrow. Our governor held off on them, seeing as we were expecting guests, thinking you might enjoy the entertainment of watching a couple of felons swing.' 'Good heavens, no!' I stammered, then wondered if perhaps my natural revulsion would be considered rudeness. I quickly added, 'What can you tell me about the Barrows?''It's your sort, really,' she confided. 'But it has been at least a thousand years or so since any warriors lived on these Islands. The barrows were built for the heroes of the Jaguar Clan, and they simply heaped treasure upon treasure over the bodies of the dead. You have no idea! I saw one of them once -- the Barrows, I mean. A robber had opened it up, but had run off and left everything behind. Could be that he saw a ghost. Anyway, I was with my young gentleman, you know. We were, um, well, you know what it's like. And we happened upon this Barrow. There was so much gold and it was shining so bright it just about blinded us both! Gold bars and plates and jewels winking at us like a thousand eyes. It was really something, Sir. You ought to have seen it. Then the governor's soldiers came round and shut it up again, shovelled earth on top of all the pretty jewels and slung the stones on top of it again. I reckon they took their share first, though.'Although I attended to her ramblings with half an ear, my mind was racing. The Jaguar Clan indeed were 'our sort'; they were the illustrious ancestors of our own family, and a few of their most intrepid warriors had sailed across half the world in longships, adventuring and exploring. They finally settled in our own Northern Island, where they ruled as overlords over the natives for many centuries. This was part of our earliest history, but every schoolkit learned the epics of the Jaguar Clan, and their exploits had become the stuff of dreams. Chapter 4 It was while we were returning from that voyage that my Uncle fell ill. At first it did not seem serious, but as days passed his condition worsened. Very soon he was too weak even to get up from his bed, and I sat by him all day, hoping against hope that he would recover. I had lost my father, I could not lose him too, not now that I realized how much I loved him. After a while he gave up eating, and started becoming delirious. All day long he talked to my father and the rest of his five brothers, all of whom were dead. He seemed to be somewhere else, dreaming a dream that was no doubt as real to him as the roaring sea was to us. In front of my very eyes I watched as he thinned so much it seemed he had shrunk over the past few days. One night, after I had given him his medicine and he had gone to sleep, I was sleeping in the chair by his bed when his voice woke me. 'Nathaniel,' he called. His voice was tireder than ever, and bore no resemblance to the one I knew, but at that moment he was more conscious than he had ever been in the past few weeks. He was no longer dreaming, and his eyes were fully focused. In a swish of a tail I was by his side, once again a mere lad on the verge of tears, as the horror I had felt on losing my father returned. 'Uncle --' 'I'm dying, Nathaniel.' I wanted to grab his paw and shout out, No, no, I'm not going to let you die, not after all you've done for me, but words stuck in my throat; all I could do was cry. 'You'll become a great cat one day, Nathaniel. Even greater than your grandfather, and that is saying something. Everything I have is yours. I love you' His voice shivered as he spoke his last words, then, slowly, his eyes closed in that sleep of peace that meets all of us in the end. I held his paw and cried my eyes out, but he was dead, and nothing would bring him back. We docked back in the harbour of St. Pierre two days later, where his funeral took place. It was well attended, and he was buried like a true sailor. It was as the coffin disappeared in the soil that the truth struck me like a lightning bolt out of a blue sky; I was alone, well and truly alone, I had no one left. That night, as I lay in my bed in Uncle's bungalow, I was approached by Johnson, the first mate of the ship along with a cat dressed in a boot-suit, who turned out to be a lawyer. 'Nathaniel,' Johnson began, 'As you no doubt already know, your Uncle left everything to you in his will.' The will was the last thing I wanted to talk about at that moment, but Johnson seemed to be leading the conversation somewhere, and I didn't like the sound of it. 'But,' said the lawyer, 'He also states that all the business will be handled by Mr. Johnson, until you come of age and are ready to take over. Until then he will be your guardian, as per your Uncle's last wishes.' I thought it ended there, but the worst was yet to come. I had never liked Johnson from the start, though not near as much as Lord Bulfour, but as he spoke the next few words, he came as close to replacing Bulfour as anyone would ever come. 'Since I can't take you with me on my next voyage, Nathaniel, as your guardian I'm sending you to finishing school, so that you can get good education. When you come of age and have enough education, the business will be handed over to you.' After they had left, I sat in my bed for a long time, staring at the ceiling, and hating everything and everyone I had known in my life. My eyes moistened, but I brushed the tears away. No, I would not cry. Crying had not brought back my father or my Uncle, and it wouldn't help me get out of this one either. Slowly, a plan formed in my mind. That night, as the bungalow slept, I crept out of my room, a backpack over my shoulder, packed with the bare minimum things that I needed. Less than two hours later I caught a train from the St. Pierre station. I know not how Johnson reacted to my disappearance, and I did not care either. I knew where I was going -- to Dascon, where one of my Uncle's closest friends lived. I had met him only once before, when my uncle had visited his pub. He was tall, chubby, tiger-striped cat with a jolly attitude, and after we had left, Uncle had told me; 'Nathaniel, if ever in your life you find yourself in need of help and I am not there for you, Fowler will be.' I was in need of help now all right, and he was my only hope. I would not go back to Johnson, not if my life depended on it. Five days after leaving St. Pierre the train arrived at Dascon, which was situated in the banks of Terensius, a great, roaring river that branched through many of the surrounding villages as well. Its rumbling sound was what welcomed me to Dascon as the train drew up to the station. As I stepped out of the train, nothing but a backpack on my shoulder, grief behind me and a whole life ahead, I was approached by the Station guard. I suppose I must have looked suspicious, a lone young cat barely into his teens, almost looking lost in the crowd. 'Can I see your ticket?' He asked. Sure, I said, and showed it to him. He turned it over in his paws as if searching for a forgery, but apparently he saw it was authentic, because he handed it back. 'You got a name?' He asked. I was about to say Nathaniel, but I was suddenly reminded of my Uncle and my father, both of whom had always called me that. I felt a lump rise in my throat, and I knew that it would happen every time I heard that name. 'Well?' The guard asked. 'Claw.' I said, 'My name is Claw.' PART TWO: THE BARCAT Chapter 1 Jonathan Fowler was a widower and had no kittens, and though grieved by the news of my Uncle's death, he welcomed me with open arms. At first he did ask me to reconsider my decision, but I stood adamant. And thus it was that I became Claw the barcat, working my keep in the pub. Mr. Fowler, as I called him, would not allow it at first, but I wouldn't have any of it. I had a small fortune waiting for me, and I had decided that when I was of age I'd go back to snatch it from Johnson. I can see now what a fool I was, and the events that followed proved my idiocy. Anyway, after a lot of arguing Mr. Fowler gave in, and though at first the prospect of running a pub did seem exciting, after a few weeks I was seized with an intense longing for the salty smell of the sea. The sea was where I belonged, it was my only true home. That was where I should be, and not behind the bar of a pub. But there was nothing I could do about it now, I was where I was. But one day as I was walking by the roaring river something happened to make my stay away from the sea a little more pleasant. It was a Sunday, and the pub closed at noon, so I had the afternoon off. I usually spent my spare time walking around the town, but that day I decided to take a walk by the river. I often went swimming in it, though I had never dared to take on the wider sections because of the current. Even the townsfolk didn't dare to cross the river except at the shallowly places, and no one ever entered a boat into it. As I walked by I saw a few thick branches floating down the river, and I suppose it was that which triggered my mind to take up the challenge which no cat had dared. I vaguely remember running back to the pub and finding the axe, then coming back to the bank and chopping down a couple of the smaller trees. For the better part of four hours I worked, but by the time I was finished I had made a small, strong, raft, easily manoeuvrable because I had even put in a small rudder, which could be turned by using the stick that stuck out of the water. Each and every muscle in my body was aching, as I wasn't used to woodwork, but I ignored it and pushed the raft through the ground into the water and hopped into it. Instantly it was caught in the current, and I was moving downstream at what seemed like an amazing speed, and at that second the pain was gone, the grief of my past was gone, and nothing existed outside the waters. The river had huge rocks jutting out of the water here and there, and each and every part of my mind was on the water as I guided the raft through the roaring current. Apparently it wasn't enough, because I had just gone about a couple of hundred yards downhill when I hit a rock and capsized. The raft broke apart and shattered, and I went into the water, barely missing a boulder. The current was on to me in an instant, but I had learned to swim almost as soon as I had learned to walk, and struck out for the shore. The water was ice-cold and I was panting by the time was halfway through, but as I reached out and grabbed the solid ground I realized that I was laughing, laughing out of sheer joy, something I had not felt since my father's death. From that day onwards I went rafting in the river in every free moment I had, and when Mr. Fowler found out about my enthusiasm the kind man bought me a canoe. Soon I knew the every ripple in the river's water and every pebble on the bank, and could guide the canoe through the whole mainstream. When that was no longer a challenge, I went seeking out the river's numerous branches, some of which were dangerous rapids. They ran all over the town and through the villages around as well, and many a time, following a new branch, I would find myself in a place I had never seen. Once I even ended up in an old farmer's fields, which he watered with some kind of a wheeling mechanism. One second I was in the river, the next, I found myself in the air for a brief instant, and landed in the mud with a squelch that must have echoed across the town. I picked myself up, covered in mud and scratching my ear, wondering what the hell had just happened, when old man farmer came through the fields waving a thong, and chased me all the way over the countryside. I didn't dare to go back to get the canoe, and in the end it was Mr. Fowler who retrieved it after apologizing to the old cat on my behalf. After this incident he kept a good eye on my adventures. Months passed. I was in my teens now, and the hours I spent in the canoe made me a pretty strong lad. Very soon Mr. Fowler was sending me in his stead for his business trips, and I got used to people calling me 'Master Claw' or 'Sir'. I soon learned to assess the quality of liquor by the smell, that whisky grew better in taste when it was preserved. I learnt how to turn old wine into brandy, and to deal with customers who got too drunk and started bashing about. I gained the respect of the regulars who came to the pub, and they stopped their 'Ahoy, there, kitten!' call, and moved on to 'Hey, barcat!' This was a definite improvement as far as I was concerned, and I worked doubly hard, so that Mr. Fowler could sit back and relax every now and then. But even though I was happy with that life, I was lonely. Most of the villagers thought me mad, because almost all of them had seen me at one time or the other, going down the river's deadly rapids, often shouting 'Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!' when I saw them. I had a feeling that most mother cats told their sons and daughters to stay away from the 'Claw Cat' as I was known to most of the village people. The ones who had vineyards were the only ones I interacted with, and that too only for business. It was at this point of my life that I met Tabby. Chapter 2 Before I go into the details of how Tabby and I met, something must be said about Tabby's past. His background was much similar to my own, as I found out later. Tabby's father was also a sailor, and he had been very faithful to his captain. The first mate of the ship was planning to mutiny against the captain and take over the ship, and Tabby's father found out about it and warned him about it. The result was an on-board battle, in which most of the Captain's cats were killed, including Tabby's Dad. But the first mate also died in the process, and Tabby had escaped by jumping into the sea. He held on to a piece of wood for two days, and was rescued by a fisherman. At that point, he had been exactly like me, with no one left in the world for him but himself. It was five months after this incident that he turned up at Dascon. I was in the town, buying up the liquor, and while I was in the store office talking to the manager a huge commotion erupted outside. On walking out, we found about four of the men standing around a young cat of about my own age, throwing every single abuse that they could think of. The young cat, a rather heavily built tabby with a smug look on his face, taking it all in without saying a single word, as if silently and ferociously showing that he had done no wrong. 'What's going on?' I asked the manager. 'Sorry for the row, Master Claw,' one of the men said, 'but this here rascal's gone and pinched a whole loaf of bread from the bakery.' (The vineyard also had a diary and a baker's store, which I had always thought a bit funny.) I looked down at him, and couldn't help feeling sorry. Here I was, same as his age, and they were calling me 'Master Claw' and him 'this here rascal'. Would they do the same or the opposite if I had been in his place, I wondered? After everything I had gone through, life was now fairer to me than it was to this poor teencat. 'Let him have it.' I said. 'Master Claw?' 'I said, let him have it.' My mother had once told me that whenever anger or rage crossed my face, my whiskers would bristle up, and the look on my face reminded her of my grandfather -- the ferocious street fighter who had disappeared during the War. I have since then found out that this look is terrible to behold, and used it only under extreme circumstances. I now used it to the full power, looking into his eyes and challenging him to say no. Slowly, the fellow backed away. 'I'll pay for it.' I said when realization dawned on me that perhaps I'd given him too big a dose. 'Yes, Master Claw.' The manager said, signalling the others to back off. 'And take him inside and give him a decent meal.' I added. 'Treat him as you would treat me.' This was probably going too far, but the cat obeyed. He had too much to lose if he got on old man Fowler's wrong side. 'Is the shipment loaded?' I asked the cats who had been loading the liquor on to the carriage before the row. 'Yes, Sir.' 'Vin, go ahead and take the first carriage to the pub. I'll follow later with the second one.' 'Yes, Master Claw.' He said and obeyed. I went back into the bakery, and was pleased to see that the young cat was by now seated in a small chair by the corner, gobbling down whatever food that was laid in front of him. He had washed and though it did not have the effect of a good bath or an even better licking over, the overall effect was that he looked much more reputable. The instant he saw me, he jumped up in saluting, and I realized that my cheeks were burning. From a grown up I could take it, but not from someone of my own age. 'Sit down,' I said, pulling up a chair for myself as I spoke. 'What's your name?' 'Tabby, Sir. Tabby Bowman Nichols.' 'Where do you come from?' And so he told me his story. He spoke without any emotional outbursts, calmly and silently recalling every possible detail. By the time he was finished, I knew that I could never leave him back where he had come from. 'Do you know any work?' 'Metalwork, Sir, and a little carpentry.' His eyes widened in excitement. 'Can you give me a job, Sir? I -- I only stole because I was hungry, Sir.' I smiled at him. 'Get in the carriage.' I said. 'And then we'll let Mr. Fowler decide.' Of course, all went according to plan, and Tabby joined the staff working at the pub. Old man Fowler called me aside and gave me a warning, though -- we had enough hands for help as it was, and didn't need any more, so don't bring home any more strays like these. He said it as harshly as he could, but I could see that he hadn't expected such and action from me, and I had risen by several points in his eyes. And thus it was that Tabby became part of my life. I told him to stop calling me 'Sir' and switch to Claw, like everyone else, but he wouldn't oblige. 'You saved me from the streets, Sir.' He would say. 'And you'll always be my Master.' 'Well, don't call me Sir, then.' I said, 'Call me something else -- try…Captain.' It was my dream; to become a ship's Captain, and I was letting it take as tiny a mould in real life as I dared. From that day onwards Tabby was right by my side wherever I went. I soon got used to it, and though I had never liked others' company too much, I found that Tabby was an exception. He was a rather clumsy, pleasant-faced cat, always wearing that curious expression on his face. He was eternally faithful, and less than a week after I had met him I made a vow to myself that if ever I became a real Captain in my life, Tabby would be my First mate, and then he could become Mr. Tabby, and he would make a fearless second-in- command. In spite of his meek looks, he turned out to be a surprisingly good sailor. I gave him a test -- made him a raft that was similar to the one on which I had completed my first successful trip of the river, and told him to launch it into the waters -- by himself. This he did without hesitation, and when the raft wrecked, (it always did on everyone's first try) he went under the water, and before I could jump in to get him, he had surfaced just beyond the shore, grinning broadly, though out of breath. Later, when the chartering service came along, I gave the same test to every cat in my crew, and didn't let them even step on the boat till they had passed. If they wrecked the raft, they had to build the next one on their own. Peter Phil actually had to build forty-seven rafts before he finally made through. But it had its results; every member of the team had the courage and daring, along with the skill, to brave any waters on earth by the time they were finished. Because of its difficulty, it came to be known among the younger cats as the 'Claw-Tabby iron test', Claw because I put them to it, and Tabby because he was the one in charge of the judging. But I wander from the course of the tale. After just about six trials Tabby passed with flying colours, and with the help of his carpentry skills, the two of us made a couple more canoes; one the same as that I had, the other bigger and better, which could seat the both of us. Soon we were exploring areas of the river no one had even dared to go into, where sometimes the water was so shallow we had to lift up the boats and put them on our shoulders to pass, and in other areas where it was so deep we couldn't see them bottom even when we dived below the surface. That summer we were taught a new variety of adventure: Hunting. It was old man Fowler himself who taught the two of us how to handle a gun, and being eager pupils we learned fast. Old man Fowler taught the first chapter well; he grabbed both of us by our ears, and shook us till our teeth rattled. Then he spoke. 'Lesson number one,' He said as I steadied the world which was spinning around me, 'Never point a gun at someone or something you don't want to kill. Because next thing you know the two of you could end up shooting each other by accident.' Tabby and I exchanged glances, and I could tell that he was imagining how it would be like to find out he had killed me, just as I was imagining how it would feel to have shot my future first mate. Horror filled both our faces, and old man Fowler smiled. 'Better to learn it now than the hard way.' He said. 'Now you know what it can feel like, I can trust you to move on to Lesson number two.' Lesson number two turned out to be focusing your concentration on the target, and not on the weapon in your hand. This one was slightly harder, and he made the two of us take aim at wooden targets with an empty rifle. I realized that he had a point, when something of that power was in your hand; you were likely to be looking at that thing instead of what you were supposed to be shooting at. But that one too, we learned fast, and moved on to Lesson three. This contained some real shooting from our parts, and some real shouting from Mr. Fowler's part. 'I said focus on the target, not the barrel of the damn rifle!' He would yell when one of us took a particularly bad miss. But the yelling and the cussing took effect, and in a few days both of us became pretty good shots, and even moved on to handguns. These were slightly harder to handle than the rifle, and though I picked up easily, Tabby did not, and still preferred the rifle, even though he was not a bad shot with a pistol. Once old man Fowler was convinced that we could handle ourselves on our own, he let us go hunting by ourselves. 'Go anywhere around the river.' He said. 'You can even go anywhere in the prairies, but stay away from the forest.' I did not dare to ask him why, and he did not bother to tell us. At first we obliged and never hunted too far away from the river, but soon we were seeking out new territories. In that the prairies themselves were spread over a vast area waiting to be explored, and we contended ourselves with that at the beginning. On Sundays we would pull out of the pub early in the day with old man Fowler's permission, and spent the morning walking over the prairie lands hunting. When noon came we would return to the river's bank, and find a nice cosy spot to cook and eat the game we had shot down. In this way we enjoyed many a rabbit stew, sometimes with fresh fish caught from the river roasted over a tripod to go with it. After the meal (and by our hunting standards it was always huge) we would take a nap in a cool shade, which stretched as much as four hours sometimes. In the afternoon we'd go canoeing some more, and return at night, by which time the pub would be closed and old man Fowler would give us a special supper, mostly pancakes, while we told him of our adventures and he cooked the leftover game which we brought for himself. These were some of the happiest days of my life. But the day came when we disobeyed him completely, and went into the forest beyond the prairies. The game was better there, there were deer to be found, though rare. When that day we went in and came back and nothing happened, our boldness grew. We were soon venturing deeper and deeper into the jungle. Twice we managed to shoot down deer, and on those days we had venison for lunch. Tabby, as befitting his figure, was an excellent cook, which suited me fine because I couldn't even brew tea; not even with a gun to my head. On one such day we had spotted a herd of about six deer, and were stalking them through the edge of the forest when we found out why old man Fowler had forbidden the forest. It was ironical, because all the time we had disobeyed him nothing happened, and when something did, we were at the borders dividing the prairie lands and the forest, and not really disobeying him. Hunting deer is nasty and extremely hard business, because there will always be a few of them keeping watch, and their jumping gallop took them higher than the tall grass of the prairie, which meant they could spot an adversary hiding in the grass, depending on your -- or their -- luck. Tabby and I were watching them from the forest's edge, holding our rifles at the ready. 'Let's go, Captain.' Tabby said, and lying down on our bellies, we started crawling forward. We were still halfway between the woods and the prairie when suddenly a feeling of acute danger came over me, making the fur on the back of my neck arch up. Slowly, I crawled around, and realized that Tabby was nowhere to be seen. 'Tabby?' I hissed. 'Tabby?' There was some sudden movement in the trees ahead, and the herd stampeded in panic, speedily disappearing into the distance in their rhythmic, slow, gallops. I swung around and aimed my rifle at the place where I thought the movement had been, but no one was there. Instead a voice spoke from somewhere else. 'Drop yer gun, laddie.' I turned, but could not tell where the sound had come from. 'Drop it or yer pal here gets it.' And, about a dozen feet, away, two big cats appeared, holding Tabby down as he struggled. From around them several cross-bows were pointed at Tabby's heart, while some others at mine. I stood up, and tossed the gun down into the grass. 'Good lad.' The voice said. 'Now back off and don't try anythin' stupid.' Again, I obliged, and from the trees a band of men emerged, clad in green and armed to the teeth. Something seemed to stick in my stomach, and I remembered Mr. Fowler telling me a long time back; 'that forest's as full of bandits and thieves as it can get.' He'd probably thought I remembered it, that's why he didn't warn us again. After all, Old man Fowler never said anything twice, and he'd been sure we wouldn't disobey. Would that become the silly cause of my death? The men let Tabby go and gave him a violent push, sending him staggering forward. He stumbled before regaining his balance and I helped him up. 'Sorry, Cap'n.' he mumbled. 'They was on me before I even knew it.' I nodded. 'What d'you reckon we should do with 'em?' One of the cats asked. 'Well, you know the rule, nobody goes back after trespassing into our territory.' My heart skipped a beat, but before I could even think of going for one of them, another said, 'No, they're just a couple o' teencats on a hunt. Frisk them, you.' The last statement was directed at a thin cat with a longbow, who set it down and checked us over. Tabby's shiny new leather belt was removed, as was my golden watch. 'Nothing more.' He declared. 'Do we let them go?' Someone asked. 'Aw, we will. Listen, you two -- it was you who shot that deer last Sunday, wasn't it?' I nodded. 'Well, now, we don't like people catching our food, but we'll let you go this time. Turn around, start walking, and don't look back. You look back, and I can't be responsible for the results. Understand?' Again, we nodded. 'Good. And don't ever hunt deer here, you hear me?' Now get going!' He raised his rifle and fired, and dust kicked up inches from Tabby's foot, making him jump. The two of us retreated, and turning, broke out into a run as fast as our paws could carry us. That's all I've written…e-mail me about what you think. Is the difference in style too obvious? I've done my best to write similar to John Doe. And thanks for all the names. I'll have three more Parts for the story. Part three will be The Charterer, Part Four: The Captain, and Part Five: The Pirate, which I hope will illustrate Claw's gradual change from the kitten to the ferocious cat as we know him. P.S: Part Two: The Barcat isn't yet finished. It will go on to show how Claw meets Katherine, and then we move on to Part Three, in which Claw gets the rest of the crew together and becomes a Transporter for the traders, and which will also show the battle that takes place with the Forest's bandits. Part Four will show how Nathaniel arrives back in St. Pierre to find that the first mate had taken the ship, claiming Claw to be dead. It goes on to show how Claw and his friends get their own ship, and set sail to the islands, where they find Lord Bulfour paw-in glove with Johnson. It will also describe the beginning of the strange events in the Barrow Lands. Part Five will bring a final showdown. I liked your idea of a supernatural encounter and I've planned a mega-blaster suspense for the end. Won't tell you what is now, it'll ruin things. Let me know what you think about it so far. P.S: Don't put the new chapters on your site…we'll surprise the others with an opening when the whole thing's finished. P.P.S: I expect it to be at least fifty pages. Too long?